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Chat Area => General Discussion Area => Topic started by: markey mark on 22 July 2008, 21:51:22
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as above please have a look at advert on here and ebay and post some comments up !! need this car sold before the 29th !! :'(
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as above please have a look at advert on here and ebay and post some comments up !! need this car sold before the 29th !! :'(
I see a price reduction, yet again :o, worse than trying to sell a house :-/
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Tell me about it, im going to try the auto trader, and if it doesn't sell i'll have a word with the local scum and have it nicked and burnt out ;D
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Buyers must have seen the video of you teararsing around a field ::)
Mind, just looked on ebay, that's a hell of a lot of car for the money. Got to go back, couple of interesting estates on there. ;)
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advert does not leap out at me mate :-/
I would delete your current thread and create a new one, don't put capitals in the subject, its not needed. Considered shouting, and would make people wonder why he needs to shout to sell his car!
Don't put it as one solid paragraph of text, seperate it out.. put lots of pictures on, and i mean lots!! Make them decent ones as well, no blur shots, make sure the car is well clean and hovered out, get the black plastic looking as black as possible...
Clearly state cars tax and MOT on seperate lines, shots of the engine bay and so on.
List all the work done in the past 12 months, as bullet points. Take photos of all the invoices you have for parts...
Little effort goes a long way!
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Ok had a look at your advert. Nice looking car and great photos. A few things i would change thou
1/ You say either bid or don't bother. sounds like you can't be arsed
2/ take out quite fast especially in sports mode. Makes you sound like a boy racer
3/Interior not perfect-maybe interior in good condition for year if you are a non smoker it is always good to put that in
4/Service book not stamped up.Has it got any stamps at all? if so say when it was stamped up to.
Hope this helps you sell it but it is always difficult when you put in a reserve as people want to try and get a bargin then start bidding up ;)
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I would change you ebay add, pull this one.
It looks like you are desperate to sell, having the original spec and then the, in the huff, lower spec listed albeit at the lower price.
Just my opinion. :)
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Ok had a look at your advert. Nice looking car and great photos. A few things i would change thou
1/ You say either bid or don't bother. sounds like you can't be arsed
2/ take out quite fast especially in sports mode. Makes you sound like a boy racer
3/Interior not perfect-maybe interior in good condition for year if you are a non smoker it is always good to put that in
4/Service book not stamped up.Has it got any stamps at all? if so say when it was stamped up to.
Hope this helps you sell it but it is always difficult when you put in a reserve as people want to try and get a bargin then start bidding up ;)
think your looking at wrong ad matey ! :-/
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I would change you ebay add, pull this one.
It looks like you are desperate to sell, having the original spec and then the, in the huff, lower spec listed albeit at the lower price.
Just my opinion. :)
i am mike need it gone :D
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What ebay number is it
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What ebay number is it
360072742949 cheers :y
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I am a member of a few other car related forums and they are all slow selling at the moment, it's the time of year i think, most folk are off on their hols so don't have the cash for a car.
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He can't say, but I can.
Nice car on ebay!.......360072742949
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I am a member of a few other car related forums and they are all slow selling at the moment, it's the time of year i think, most folk are off on their hols so don't have the cash for a car.
aye mate never thought of that ! :-/
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Your starting price is the same as your buy it now price ::)
I would lower the starting price to encourage bidding :y
Or if your that desperate lower your buy it now price as well :-/
You still have the line "HAVE SET RESERVE AT £1250" on the listing but it is available for a grand with buy it now :-?
Sorry mate, it needs a revamp ;)
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Your starting price is the same as your buy it now price ::)
I would lower the starting price to encourage bidding :y
Or if your that desperate lower your buy it now price as well :-/
You still have the line "HAVE SET RESERVE AT £1250" on the listing but it is available for a grand with buy it now :-?
Sorry mate, it needs a revamp ;)
yes have just lowered price need it shifting !! :(
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I'm confused by "RIGHT I'VE PUT IT BACK TO STANDARD"
Was it sub standard before? What's been removed? Why?
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I'm confused by "RIGHT I'VE PUT IT BACK TO STANDARD"
Was it sub standard before? What's been removed? Why?
no it was chipped and had a stainless exh and induction kit on :y
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sorry buts its not a good ebay listing, go back to basics don't sound desperate and get better photos.
Have a look at some listings for cars that have sold like - 220250357708 lots of info with no personal comments and good photos. best of luck.
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sorry buts its not a good ebay listing, go back to basics don't sound desperate and get better photos.
Have a look at some listings for cars that have sold like - 220250357708 lots of info with no personal comments and good photos. best of luck.
He might have a point, a good add though perhaps too much info. No link to oof though so should have post counts removed. ;D ;D ;D
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I'm confused by "RIGHT I'VE PUT IT BACK TO STANDARD"
Was it sub standard before? What's been removed? Why?
no it was chipped and had a stainless exh and induction kit on :y
Thats the confusion though, why not just edit it out of the ad, it now contradicts itself. :y
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You are hightlighting all the good bits, its just too much to read.
Lose the Capitals.
First paragraph, sell the car and it's features, i.e.
MV6 saloon, 3.0 auto, 92,000 miles with lots of history and receipts to prove.
Recently replaced cambelt and tensioners, lower arms and drop links. Lots of features such as
list all the bits you have done to it like the respray,
Fially put the bad bits, but make them sound good, i.e the wheels are original and would benefit from being re-laqured.
i would take out the bit about scrapping it, sorry mate that sounds desperate.
I would bin the auction as well and got for a classified, you get 12 free pics and pretty much as much text as you can type, the more info and pics i can see the more likely you are to get interest...
good luck
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Don't say whats not on it .... makes it sound like it either needs extra bits to work properly, or you "boy raced" it.
You are selling the car as it is NOW .. not what it was like some time ago.
As they say ... accentuate the positive :y :y :y
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i'm in the same boat, and mine's a steal, and would be even without LPG!!
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The reason you havent sold it yet is because you havent offered it to me for a tenner....... ::) ::) ::) ::) ::)
;D ;D ;D ;D