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Author Topic: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD  (Read 2398 times)

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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #15 on: 22 July 2008, 22:35:56 »

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Your starting price is the same as your buy it now price  ::)

I would lower the starting price to encourage bidding  :y

Or if your that desperate lower your buy it now price as well  :-/

You still have the line "HAVE SET RESERVE AT £1250" on the listing but it is available for a grand with buy it now  :-?

Sorry mate, it needs a revamp  ;)

yes have just lowered price need it shifting !!  :(
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #16 on: 22 July 2008, 22:41:07 »

I'm confused by "RIGHT I'VE PUT IT BACK TO STANDARD"

Was it sub standard before?  What's been removed?  Why?
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #17 on: 22 July 2008, 22:42:27 »

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I'm confused by "RIGHT I'VE PUT IT BACK TO STANDARD"

Was it sub standard before?  What's been removed?  Why?

no it was chipped and had a stainless exh and induction kit on  :y
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #18 on: 22 July 2008, 22:59:08 »

sorry buts its not a good ebay listing, go back to basics don't sound desperate and get better photos.

Have a look at some listings for cars that have sold like - 220250357708 lots of info with no personal comments and good photos. best of luck.
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #19 on: 22 July 2008, 23:21:38 »

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sorry buts its not a good ebay listing, go back to basics don't sound desperate and get better photos.

Have a look at some listings for cars that have sold like - 220250357708 lots of info with no personal comments and good photos. best of luck.

He might have a point, a good add though perhaps too much info. No link to oof though so should have post counts removed. ;D ;D ;D
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #20 on: 22 July 2008, 23:30:46 »

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I'm confused by "RIGHT I'VE PUT IT BACK TO STANDARD"

Was it sub standard before?  What's been removed?  Why?

no it was chipped and had a stainless exh and induction kit on  :y

Thats the confusion though, why not just edit it out of the ad, it now contradicts itself. :y
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #21 on: 22 July 2008, 23:34:01 »

You are hightlighting all the good bits, its just too much to read.

Lose the Capitals.

First paragraph, sell the car and it's features, i.e.

MV6 saloon, 3.0 auto, 92,000 miles with lots of history and receipts to prove.
Recently replaced cambelt and tensioners, lower arms and drop links. Lots of features such as

  • blah

  • blah
  • blah

list all the bits you have done to it like the respray,

Fially put the bad bits, but make them sound good, i.e the wheels are original and would benefit from being re-laqured.

i would take out the bit about scrapping it, sorry mate that sounds desperate.

I would bin the auction as well and got for a classified, you get 12 free pics and pretty much as much text as you can type, the more info and pics i can see the more likely you are to get interest...

good luck
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #22 on: 22 July 2008, 23:39:01 »

Don't say whats not on it ....  makes it sound like it either needs extra bits to work properly, or you "boy raced" it.

You are selling the car as it is NOW .. not what it was like some time ago.

As they say ...  accentuate the positive  :y :y :y
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #23 on: 22 July 2008, 23:48:42 »

i'm in the same boat, and mine's a steal, and would be even without LPG!!
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #24 on: 22 July 2008, 23:55:22 »

The reason you havent sold it yet is because you havent offered it to me for a tenner.......  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::)

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