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WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« on: 22 July 2008, 21:51:22 »
as above please have a look at advert on here and ebay and post some comments up !! need this car sold before the 29th !!  :'(
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« Reply #1 on: 22 July 2008, 21:53:29 »
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as above please have a look at advert on here and ebay and post some comments up !! need this car sold before the 29th !!  :'(


I see a price reduction, yet again :o, worse than trying to sell a house :-/
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #2 on: 22 July 2008, 21:54:58 »
Tell me about it, im going to try the auto trader, and if it doesn't sell i'll have a word with the local scum and have it nicked and burnt out ;D
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #3 on: 22 July 2008, 22:08:58 »
Buyers must have seen the video of you teararsing around a field ::)

Mind, just looked on ebay, that's a hell of a lot of car for the money. Got to go back, couple of interesting estates on there. ;)
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #4 on: 22 July 2008, 22:12:26 »
advert does not leap out at me mate  :-/

I would delete your current thread and create a new one, don't put capitals in the subject, its not needed. Considered shouting, and would make people wonder why he needs to shout to sell his car!

Don't put it as one solid paragraph of text, seperate it out.. put lots of pictures on, and i mean lots!! Make them decent ones as well, no blur shots, make sure the car is well clean and hovered out, get the black plastic looking as black as possible...

Clearly state cars tax and MOT on seperate lines, shots of the engine bay and so on.

List all the work done in the past 12 months, as bullet points. Take photos of all the invoices you have for parts...

Little effort goes a long way!
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #5 on: 22 July 2008, 22:17:53 »
Ok had a look at your advert. Nice looking car and great photos. A few things i would change thou
1/ You say either bid or don't bother. sounds like you can't be arsed
2/ take out quite fast especially in sports mode. Makes you sound like a boy racer
3/Interior not perfect-maybe interior in good condition for year if you are a non smoker it is always good to put that in
4/Service book not stamped up.Has it got any stamps at all? if so say when it was stamped up to.
Hope this helps you sell it but it is always difficult when you put in a reserve as people want to try and get a bargin then start bidding up ;)
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #6 on: 22 July 2008, 22:22:59 »
I would change you ebay add, pull this one.
It looks like you are desperate to sell, having the original spec and then the, in the huff, lower spec listed albeit at the lower price.

Just my opinion. :)
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #7 on: 22 July 2008, 22:26:51 »
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Ok had a look at your advert. Nice looking car and great photos. A few things i would change thou
1/ You say either bid or don't bother. sounds like you can't be arsed
2/ take out quite fast especially in sports mode. Makes you sound like a boy racer
3/Interior not perfect-maybe interior in good condition for year if you are a non smoker it is always good to put that in
4/Service book not stamped up.Has it got any stamps at all? if so say when it was stamped up to.
Hope this helps you sell it but it is always difficult when you put in a reserve as people want to try and get a bargin then start bidding up ;)

think your looking at wrong ad matey ! :-/
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #8 on: 22 July 2008, 22:27:34 »
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I would change you ebay add, pull this one.
It looks like you are desperate to sell, having the original spec and then the, in the huff, lower spec listed albeit at the lower price.

Just my opinion. :)

i am mike need it gone  :D
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #9 on: 22 July 2008, 22:30:05 »
What ebay number is it
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #10 on: 22 July 2008, 22:31:17 »
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What ebay number is it

360072742949 cheers :y
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« Reply #11 on: 22 July 2008, 22:31:44 »
I am a member of a few other car related forums and they are all slow selling at the moment, it's the time of year i think, most folk are off on their hols so don't have the cash for a car.
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #12 on: 22 July 2008, 22:32:14 »
He can't say, but I can.
Nice car on ebay!.......360072742949
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #13 on: 22 July 2008, 22:32:56 »
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I am a member of a few other car related forums and they are all slow selling at the moment, it's the time of year i think, most folk are off on their hols so don't have the cash for a car.

aye mate never thought of that ! :-/
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Re: WHATS WRONG WITH MY CAR ADVERT ?? NEED IT SOLD
« Reply #14 on: 22 July 2008, 22:34:37 »
Your starting price is the same as your buy it now price  ::)

I would lower the starting price to encourage bidding  :y

Or if your that desperate lower your buy it now price as well  :-/

You still have the line "HAVE SET RESERVE AT £1250" on the listing but it is available for a grand with buy it now  :-?

Sorry mate, it needs a revamp  ;)
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